Wandering — The

“It’s a wandering series in need of an editor. Well written and acted but the pacing is weird and story arcs aren’t arced well, IMO.” www.facebook.com · 1 year ago

: The story is driven by deeply flawed and relatable protagonists like Erin Solstice and Ryoka Griffin. While some early readers find Erin’s "airheaded" or "annoying" personality a hurdle, many argue that her growth and the emotional payoffs—often described as "heartbreaking"—are worth the investment. the wandering

: As a web novel with over 16 million words, the pacing is a frequent point of critique. Many reviewers note that the first book feels like a "messy first draft" in need of a heavy-handed editor, with chapters that frequently "wander" and "dawdle" through slice-of-life moments. “It’s a wandering series in need of an editor

“I almost put it down several times. Glad I didn't. Because these books don't have a traditional editor, you really get to see the author's writing evolve, and it gets much more polished as it goes on.” : As a web novel with over 16