Focus on Ora’s past. What was she "on the verge of getting" before the motel changed her life? Use flashbacks to show what she's lost to build sympathy or tension. 1 version of the game? Ora's Motel [v0.2][Swift Polar] - Swiftpolar - itch.io
Focus on the guests. Each guest could bring a specific problem that Ora has to solve, slowly pulling her deeper into the motel's web.
If you are looking to write or expand this story yourself, you could focus on these three paths:
Focus on Ora’s past. What was she "on the verge of getting" before the motel changed her life? Use flashbacks to show what she's lost to build sympathy or tension. 1 version of the game? Ora's Motel [v0.2][Swift Polar] - Swiftpolar - itch.io
Focus on the guests. Each guest could bring a specific problem that Ora has to solve, slowly pulling her deeper into the motel's web. Ora Motel 0.1PC.rar
If you are looking to write or expand this story yourself, you could focus on these three paths: Focus on Ora’s past
