"The clauses," Jade countered, tapping a manicured nail against the fine print. "You think because it's Halloween, I’m not looking for the ghosts in the machine? You’ve got me signed over for three times the work for half the 'treat' we discussed."
"Funny," she said, dropping the papers back onto the table with a soft thud . "I was expecting a treat. But this? This looks like a trick." jade kush tricked and treated
As she walked away, the heavy doors of the lounge swung open, letting in a gust of cold October air. She didn't look back. In the world of Jade Kush, you either played the game or you got played—and she was never one to be fooled by a costume. Tips for Refining This Draft: "The clauses," Jade countered, tapping a manicured nail
You can sharpen Jade's dialogue to be more "boss-like" or "mysterious" depending on the persona you want to project. "I was expecting a treat
In front of her sat a man in a sharp, slate-grey suit, sliding a manila envelope across the mahogany table. "It’s all there," he murmured, his voice barely audible over the music. "The best treat you’ll get this year."