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The rebuttal effectively addressed initial concerns regarding empirical validity on larger scales. By framing the optimization objective as a reduction in the L-norm distance between the target and draft distributions, the authors provide a clear path for improving acceptance rates in high-throughput LLM inference.

I’ve finished reading the first draft of your manuscript, and you’ve built a very solid structural foundation. The plot logic is sound, and the pacing moves at a brisk, professional clip that kept me turning pages. However, the current emotional resonance feels a bit "flat." flatter

If you are drafting a review for a friend or colleague's first draft that feels "flat" or lacks emotional depth: The plot logic is sound, and the pacing

The characters often state exactly what they are feeling rather than letting their environment or actions reveal their internal state. To take this from a "flat" draft to a immersive experience, I’d suggest leaning into more sensory clues to ground the reader. The plot logic is sound